In this week's Guild Sores comic, artist David North takes a look at the delicate nature of turning in quests to those pesky NPCs. Check out Guild Sores!
With my first toon I read all the lingo/content,after that my others zoom through.Apart from certain quests like the sarges in FG( Falen Gate,eq2),totally love that questline and story and listen to it every time:)
Loved the pacakge like like some other bad mmos with mispelled words and quests that make you talk to an npc when there are many similar npcs in the same area.
I think the cartoonist has potential, but from strip-to-strip seems to fall into the same pattern of text misplacement. Our eyes go from left-to-right, and so panels like the first and last ones in this strip come off as jumbled because the text boxes are not ordered in the way we see them.
I suggest that for the next strip, he pencils/roughs-in all the text first, and then draws in the images to match that. I think that would help him overcome the issue. Or develop a step where he pencils the strip or roughs-it in on the computer first, if that's what's missing.
Because once that text problem is conquered, I think his work will start to impress.
Comments
Alright David, what pick up line did you use, and how hard did she smack ya.
I am liking your comics, they are entertaining to me.
Work hard Play Harder
Brilliant. Those inconvenient quests and their prattling npc's... ; )
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Just FYI - you spelled "package" wrong.
Funny comic though.
No godless person can comprehend those minute distinctions
in doctrine that provide true believers excuse for mayhem.
-Glen Cook
The write ups with the comics are better then the actual comics that are just kind of "meh" without them, heh...
I agree with zellmer. These comics couldn't stand on their own.
With my first toon I read all the lingo/content,after that my others zoom through.Apart from certain quests like the sarges in FG( Falen Gate,eq2),totally love that questline and story and listen to it every time:)
First panel fucked up the left to right reading ...
Loved the pacakge like like some other bad mmos with mispelled words and quests that make you talk to an npc when there are many similar npcs in the same area.
Well that was a boring comic.
I think the cartoonist has potential, but from strip-to-strip seems to fall into the same pattern of text misplacement. Our eyes go from left-to-right, and so panels like the first and last ones in this strip come off as jumbled because the text boxes are not ordered in the way we see them.
I suggest that for the next strip, he pencils/roughs-in all the text first, and then draws in the images to match that. I think that would help him overcome the issue. Or develop a step where he pencils the strip or roughs-it in on the computer first, if that's what's missing.
Because once that text problem is conquered, I think his work will start to impress.
I think there is a need for a thumbs down button.